Dream Deep

Really? That's interesting. I can't seem to download that one, oh well. Hm, that's odd. I wanted you to hear it, too... maybe I'll email it over. Hehe, it's a ...

That's because it's... the infamous Chair! Which is, undoubtedly, one of the best fiction pieces that has ever been on YWS. .> Er... As to the 'flipping story', let's hope ...

I haven't the slightest clue how I can thank you enough for this, Cal... hard to even try. I am so greatful for this. Just the thought that went into ...

Glad you've enjoyed it thus far, Kay Kay. ^_^ Ahem. An update. Last night was my first (and quite certainly, last) all-night writing spree. In which the Chair was brought ...

O.O I need to crit this. *hides*

Thanks very much, Shadow. Ah... yes, there is a good amount of typos in this draft. Just another reason to get the new one churned out quicker, eh? They are ...

My poetry never quite works out - there's a reason Dostoyevsky was a novelist and not a poet. Can't shake those long lines for the life of me. (I seem ...

Thanks... even so, I hope I'm not driving you too insane with all of this. ~_~ It would be so much easier if I was just to will you all ...

I like that version better. It's amazing what a simple suffix can do! Indeed it is. ^_~ Thanks for, ah, letting me tear apart your 'lapping' - and adding in ...

Perhaps something to the effect of: ' Rush. Russssssshhhhh. Lapping. Lapping. ... Lapping. ' Split it up a bit more, yes? In the very least it lengthens out the words, ...

STOP RUSHING OVER ! What, do I have to give my first-born male child to you people along with the promise that you'll get a PM? ^_~ Haha - don't ...

*hides scribblings beneath an old notebook* No peeking. ^_~ Writing it, I promise, I promise... I don't want to get whacked with the Big Writing Stick. ^_^

Cal : Your pretzel logic may be reassuring? ^~ Ah well... with any luck I'll have more for you to crit in not too long a time. Kay : Feel ...

*hugs* Thanks so much, Till. ^_^ Your opinion means a lot, especially on this. I'm just flattered that you took the time to go through it and write everything in. ...

Much thanks for the extended commentary and crit, Shireling. Ah, yes, it is a good bit tidier and cleaner now that I've had such an amount of time to work ...